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Tuesday, 10 November 2020

Famous Protester: Kate Sheppard

 Kate Shepppard

Intro: 

Kate Sheppard was a famous protester who  fought for the rights of women. She was born in 1847 in Liverpool, England but later in life she had to moved to New Zealand with her family. She died at the age of 87 on  13th of July 1934.


1st Paragraph:

Kate Sheppard protested for a reason, she did it because she believed that women should be allowed to play a full role in society. During Kate Sheppard’s time women were not allowed to vote and their rules were very restricted. Some rules that were hold against the women was that they couldn't sell their land/property, need consent from her father or husband to open a bank account and couldn't vote. She fought and fought until she saw the equal treatment the people give to men as well as the women. 


2nd Paragraph:

Before the petition, Kate Sheppard did many other things to help with her up-coming women’s rights protest. She travelled throughout New Zealand, holding public meetings and building support for the cause.Kate Sheppard was a great organizer and she began collecting signatures for the petition that was going to be presented at the New Zealand Parliament. Unfortunately the first petition failed in 1891 but this never stop Kate, she got back up, started again and collected more signatures.


3rd Paragraph:

On 1893 on her third try was her third petition. Kate Sheppard convinced a total of 32,000 people. This final petition was very successful which means that women were finally allowed to vote. Without any of these happening NZ women would have never voted at the beginning. Now New Zealand is the first place that women were first to vote.


Conclusion:

In conclusion Kate sheppard has made history for women in New Zealand. Without the hard work Kate Sheppard did during the petition women would never have been treated equally. Now women are finally allowed to vote and do stuff men do. “We are tired of having a ‘sphere’ doled out to us, and of being told that anything outside that sphere is ‘unwomanly’.” - Kater Sheppard.


Thursday, 24 September 2020

Eleven!


TASK DESCRIPTION: 
Today in our Literacy class, we read a book called Eleven which was by Sandra Cisneros
WALT:
Infer meaning from a text

Thursday, 17 September 2020

Finding my Place by Bayley Corfield


WALT: infer meaning from a text

Task description: Today for our last Reading task this week, we read another new text called Finding my Place which was written by  Bayley Corfield. This text was mostly about music, bands, audience, performance and a saxaphone. We did our grammar work, practiced on more inferencing and lastly for our paragraph writing we had to write what is 'Belonging'.

Thursday, 3 September 2020

Time Warp by Seb Darr



Task Description: Today for Literacy we read a new text today which is called Time Warp by Seb Darr. This book is about a school boy named jack who dislikes the subject History. As he rides back home he rides into a tree and blacks out for a while. Once he woke up he thinks that he ended up in the middle ages, he also thought that he entered a TIME WARP. Did he or did he not?


Monday, 17 August 2020

TEEL- Writing Construction!



WALT: Use correct paragraph structure

Here is our writing task for week 4. This week we have been learning how to use correct paragraph structures. Here is the paragraph structure we have been using:
TEEL
- Topic Sentence
- Example/Evidence
- Explanation
- Link